We were learning to choose our own writing to write about. I liked writing about my brother.
We gave Beau a present today. It was a transformer called
Bumblebee. We will have a big day with Beau and we will
not let him know. For dinner he wants cookies and cake. It was Beaus birthday he turned six. Lots of people came to Beau's birthday party. It made him very happy.
Hi Nixon, Wow it sounds like you really game him a nice birthday and a big surprise. Did he like his present and cake?
ReplyDeleteWell done Nixon on your writing. Beau was very lucky on his birthday. I can't wait to read you next piece of writing. Ka pai.
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